What are your fan fiction gripes?

Discussion in 'Fan Town' started by OtherCat, Aug 27, 2016.

  1. vuatson

    vuatson [delurks]

    man I understand why Mob is difficult to characterize but writers in this fandom reeeeeally love handing him the idiot ball don’t they
     
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  2. Nobody's Home

    Nobody's Home I'm a Greg Coded Tom Girl

    Man I haven't jumped onto mp100 fic but like
    Mob seems to have kind of a hard time in school but in text he's also introspective and observant? He's not fighty about some stuff but he has his own sound judgement calls
    Idk that sounds like a disservice to Mob dang :/
     
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  3. vuatson

    vuatson [delurks]

    Yeah. I’ve had to click away from several otherwise good fics because the author basically wrote him as a little kid. People tend to see his social obliviousness and make him just generally dense (which I gotta say is especially :/ considering how heavily autistic-coded he is).

    That’s not to say that there aren’t any good fics, though - I’ve read a couple that absolutely blew me away, characterization and all. The problem is that the rest of the fandom is having a hard time living up to their standard :(
     
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  4. TheSeer

    TheSeer 37 Bright Visionary Crushes The Doubtful

    I can see where they're coming from, as it's one of the core conceits of the plot that Mob has fallen for a con that's made amusingly transparent to the audience. Or at least that's how people seem to interpret it - I'm half convinced Mob had figured everything out by chapter 1 and just didn't care. Partly because he doesn't actually seem to be stupid or easy to fool.
     
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  5. vuatson

    vuatson [delurks]

    Yeah, I understand why people get that impression for sure and I’m not up in arms about it, it just bothers me to read.

    I think Reigen is a bit of a blind spot for Mob. The knowledge that Reigen has psychic powers and can therefore help Mob control his own powers is a pillar of Mob’s mental stability, so he dismisses things that might have tipped him off because obviously Reigen is so much wiser and more experienced that he must be right. That does change over the course of the series as Mob gains other meaningful relationships, though. (Did he know at the end of the separation arc? I thought he did but then Reigen did the dramatic reveal in the finale which confused me)
     
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  6. TheSeer

    TheSeer 37 Bright Visionary Crushes The Doubtful

    Intellectually I get why fic tags shouldn't be sarcastic, but I really miss "Endeavor's A+ Parenting"
     
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  7. LadyNighteyes

    LadyNighteyes Wicked Witch of the Radiant Historia Fandom

    I've come this close to using the local equivalent on a couple of my fics.
     
  8. LumiLapin

    LumiLapin Bad Bad Bun

    God I find love at first sight fics super boring
     
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  9. Nobody's Home

    Nobody's Home I'm a Greg Coded Tom Girl

    I interpreted it as Reigen actually admitting his fakeness and admitting that he used Mob as a sign of closeness and grounds mob with his powers. Cause Reigen was exposed by others during the separation arc but this is him willingly telling Mob himself that he is fake

    Since the whole thing about Mob and his powers is his fear of it, and he came to Reigen for help all those years ago, and Reigen giving advice which Mob took to heart

    When Mob was talking to ???% they did refer to Reigen as that guy who was just taking advantage of Mob. So Reigen like being actually honest with Mob is letting down one of his barriers to his student figure

    I'm not sure I'm like explaining stuff properly, but this was how I understood that scene

    Eta clarified my sentences
     
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  10. vuatson

    vuatson [delurks]

    Yeah that would make sense! It's a functionally useless but emotionally meaningful moment, just like almost everything Reigen does <3
     
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  11. vuatson

    vuatson [delurks]

    oh, and a related gripe - when people rob Reigen of his silver tongue and +18 to all bluff checks. let the man be good at stuff, I know he acts like an idiot sometimes but he’s actually very good at what he does
     
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  12. Codeless

    Codeless Cheshire Cat

    Dear author, throwing the reader in at the deep end is great for action scenes, not so great for porn.

    You cant just start things with a dick already in a butt. Its jarring.
     
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  13. Lizardlicks

    Lizardlicks Friendly Neighborhood Lizard

    Hmm. I could probably make it work.
     
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  14. jacktrash

    jacktrash spherical sockbox

    dear ficcer, you are doing a very good job in general, but when you mention 'agent carter' in a captain america fic you do need to specify whether you mean peggy or sharon. you're known for your innovative AU's so for all i can tell this is one where steve and bucky have a modern origin and peggy's running shield ops. plus you're writing from bucky's POV and you've specified he's taken the shield so steve can step out of the public eye, which means, in comicverse at least, that he and sharon are on first name terms as teammates; you've got him referring to romanov as 'natasha', he should refer to carter as 'sharon'. or if they're using callsigns, 'thirteen', not 'carter'.

    this very gentle grump brought to you by the fifteen minutes i spent backreading the entire fic trying to figure out whether it was an AU or not.
     
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  15. YggiDee

    YggiDee Well-Known Member

    Current gripe- large fandom has large cast, and it's hard to find the difference between "tagged character features in this fic" and "tagged character appears in this fic" looking at you, Iida.
     
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  16. garden

    garden lucid dreamer

    ugh yeah same

    my kingdom for either 1) some kind of separate tag category for Primary Relationships and Primary Characters vs “this relationship is mentioned”/“this character appears in the background,” or 2) people stop tagging characters/ships who are firmly in the background
     
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  17. Aondeug

    Aondeug Cringe Annoying Ass Female Lobster

    That makes finding yuri fics in some shit absolutely hellish unless it's female dominated casts or a yuri series.
     
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  18. KingStarscream

    KingStarscream watch_dogs walking advertisement

    Tagging background characters/ships is the bane of my goddamn existence and part of why I refuse to tag for any character that doesn't have a major speaking role now.
     
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  19. YggiDee

    YggiDee Well-Known Member

    Yeah, sometimes you luck out at someone started a "[character]-centric" tag but they aren't consistently used or reliable. And by this point you can't really make major changes to how the tag system works because there's ten years of fanfic on there that won't magically re-tag itself to standard.
     
  20. Aondeug

    Aondeug Cringe Annoying Ass Female Lobster

    I only tag main characters and ships. I will only ever tag those.
     
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