Hmmm. The center of the dip in the top lip looks a little off, as if it's too far to the right, and that squishes the top down a little too much. And the center of her face doesn't quite match up with her chin. Love the eyes though. They're so clean and expressive. @bioluminiscence care for more color critique?
Trouble has arrived! (aka an icon commission for @Anomal(eee) - the first semi-realistic-shading lineless work i've done!)
@bioluminiscence You definitely need to up the contrast in shading there, especially for her skin tone. Right now her skull looks very flat, so I'd concentrate on adding a sense of roundness there. I'd also suggest a line of color, dark or light, around the edge of her wings to distinguish them from the background.
Redid Heavytred a bit! Based more on actual bomb defusal duds. The wire and mask retract. They often retract the wire, but keep the mask, cause they are not very fond of their face. Think it looks too young and kinda cutesy. Still favor their alt mode above all else. For personality, I think they're kinda careless. They're not actually a very good bomb defusal dude, mostly because they're nigh indestructible, and it's easier and more fun for them to just take the hit. They're not super great at thinking about other people's safety and comfort. Tends to forget what normal bots can actually be hurt by. Technically its their responsibility to protect people, buuut, again, not super good at this kinda stuff.
Spoiler: truly the most terrifying figure of the past century Spoiler: some ladies from the awesome comic shoot around go read it
finished another commission. slowly chugging my way through. been having such a hard time concentrating
I spent all day trying to re-teach myself shading in human skin colors instead of troll greys (this is what I get for being a dirty homestuck) (and it doesn't even show well in the photograph of the sketchbook) but- There she is.
Here, have my sketches of the monster too. Spoiler: nsfw? nothing really sexual, but mind the alien genitalia diagrams
I will always be Jotun!Loki trash. Specifically the popularized horned version by Llanval. My favorite is this one though.