Writing What You Don't Know: The Assistants

Discussion in 'Make It So' started by jacktrash, Aug 3, 2016.

  1. Astrodynamicist

    Astrodynamicist Adequate Potato Goblin

    They may also eat grass if you spend too long chatting with a neighbor on what is, after all, supposed to be their walkies. : p
     
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  2. lvkz

    lvkz Well-Known Karkat

    i need some help with writing a black character who is a ghost and died before i was born

    i also just need creative help with this story in general
     
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  3. Lazarae

    Lazarae The tide pod of art

    Can I get a bit of help with Japanese Buddhism? Nothing too deep (though if you have reference stuff for it specifically I will devour that shit because knowledge tasty) since the character's a casual believer, but he is from a more devout family and so is kind of... reflexively religious? It mostly shows through when shit hits fan.

    Mostly I want to know what would be religiously appropriate for encountering death, and reflecting back on the killers/victims. I'm guessing prayers to Kannon for the latter, since his defining personality traits are compassion, empathy, and understanding. And given the whole shitty situation, he maintains that for the killers as well.

    Unfortunately other than that I don't know even where to start. I keep getting looped back to other flavors of Buddhism with no reference to how the Japanese adapted it and I don't want to get things wrong.
     
  4. keltka

    keltka the green and brown one

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  5. keltka

    keltka the green and brown one

    my suggestion is to look at shinto as well? because as far as I can tell things kind of got....folded together
     
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  6. Mercury

    Mercury Well-Known Member

    I need suggestions for certain kinds of jobs and details thereof!

    The situation: I have a character who needs to be in a largeish rural town for a limited period of time - more than a week but less than a month - and since being there to visit someone is off the table, figure that they'd be there for some sort of temporary work. By preference it'd be something hands-on, not office work, and they'd be going there as part of their actual job. I've considered that they may need to deliver/pick something up, or work on repairs to something on-site, but I'm at a loss to any finer detail than that.

    The town in question has schools, a rail yard, a lumber yard, a hospital, a pretty wide variety of businesses, and a rural farming community surrounding it. The character has driven in from a city; it's probably not any closer than across state, and may be further (if it matters).

    I also could use suggestions of where this person would likely to be lodging during this time, being as they don't have friends or family to stay with. Some sort of motel with a discount long term rate?
     
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  7. TheSeer

    TheSeer 37 Bright Visionary Crushes The Doubtful

    On that time scale? It could be related to construction of a building or some kind of heavy equipment - unskilled labor would be local but there's a lot of skilled labor in a job like that. An engineer, architect, building contractor, or specialized electrician or something might be brought in from elsewhere for a particular project.

    And it wouldn't have to be a motel, the town you're describing is big enough for a non-luxury hotel like a Holiday Inn or something. In fact, a town like you describe would probably call itself a city, though no one out of state would have heard of it before. (The hospital in particular tells me that locals would think of this place as a hub for the area.)
     
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  8. Mercury

    Mercury Well-Known Member

    ... Dang, I feel like I've been caught. >_>; I'm not-so-subtly basing this place off of the town I grew up in and that's exactly what it's like. XD

    I think a specialized electrician is along the lines of what I want, since this character is unlikely to have gone to university but is smart and motivated enough to have pursued a trade, and it works really well with their personality. It also gives me some new options to pursue for the paranormal shenanigans in the plot. Thank you!! :D
     
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  9. jacktrash

    jacktrash spherical sockbox

    i was going to suggest seasonal farm work, but it sounds like you've got it covered.
     
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  10. Helen of Boy

    Helen of Boy Hugcrafter Pursuivant

    Long term motels are certainly an option, if a regular budget hotel doesn't appeal. I know my hometown of 3400 people had a motel that was really a bunch of mini houses, sometimes single-occupant, sometimes duplex. A little more private than a regular hotel building, decent set up for longer-term visitors, and the kind of place jobs spring for to attract skilled electricians when they need them somewhere for a while. Not huge on amenities, and I don't recall if there was much more of a kitchen than a sink and minifridge, but they had private bathrooms and color TVs with at least a few channels and when I was a kid that was super exciting.
     
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  11. Mercury

    Mercury Well-Known Member

    I had considered it as a possibility before I asked, but it's a bad fit from enough angles I knew I needed a different option. I'd intended to mention it was off the table but I lost the thought in fussing over wording in the original post. :X
     
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  12. ChelG

    ChelG Well-Known Member

    Question; there's a cop character who wears a badge on a cord round her neck and not a recognisable uniform, what rank is she likely to be? I want her to show up in a thing but I don't know what exactly she'd be doing. Here's her:
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  13. ChelG

    ChelG Well-Known Member

    @lvkz What era was the ghost alive in?
     
  14. TheSeer

    TheSeer 37 Bright Visionary Crushes The Doubtful

    @ChelG Detective, probably.
     
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  15. ChelG

    ChelG Well-Known Member

  16. jacktrash

    jacktrash spherical sockbox

    yeah, generally a cop in street clothes with a lanyard badge is a detective, though some crime scene techs and other specialists also wear street clothes instead of a uniform on the job sometimes. i reckon if the character was a lab tech or a profiler or something you'd know from the story, so detective is the best guess.
     
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  17. jacktrash

    jacktrash spherical sockbox

    ps i can handle ducks with fingers but what is her earring attached to
     
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  18. Wingyl

    Wingyl Allegedly Magic

    its a clipon attached to the feathers probably
     
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  19. TheSeer

    TheSeer 37 Bright Visionary Crushes The Doubtful

    Just think of it as a hair clip and go about your business, this way lies madness.
     
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  20. paladinkit

    paladinkit brave little paladin

    Hi! I'm writing some characters going mushroom hunting in approximately October weather, and I did all the research for what kind of mushrooms (black trumpet) and where they can find them (mossy hardwood forests, damp spots, in leaf litter). This seems like ideal territory to accidentally run into snakes, but I am petering out on research spoons - is this actually a place they could accidentally disturb a snake? what kind of snake? what do snakes do when they're disturbed?

    thank you in advance for your snake knowledge. mushroom details in an attached image.

    Edit to add: this is a fantasy setting, I don't need to stick to IRL snake species ranges
     

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